Thanks so much, Leon, for joining in here. As we touched on today when we were together, a conversation about the use of this Blog is probably more appropriate to the yahoogroup, but over email it is harder to see everyone's individual work laid out before you.

My suggestion would be to copy what has gone before that you'd like to modify (by highlighting, copying, and pasting) and make a new entry with your changes. I've seen that work marvelously.

Several folks suggested they liked the first sentence best. I'm wondering what is next. Perhaps a useful experiement here might be to attempt to merge the two, or highlight what is most prefered about both?